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The Burning Star Star Series Book 1 edition by Jessie Lane Melissa LeoPahl Paranormal Romance eBooks

Favorite Lines "The way the wolf looked at me, I felt like it saw right through me to my soul. I never knew an animal could see someone so thoroughly the way this one seemed to see me. My hands trembled at some emotion I couldn’t name. It wasn’t fear; it was more like an overwhelming sense of knowing and intimacy.”

“You’ve finally shown up after I’ve been waiting years just to meet you. I don’t know how this will end, but what I do know is that I’m not ready to say goodbye. I’ve seen you fragile and I’ve seen you strong. Part of me just wants to continue to see the rest of it. If you’re uncomfortable with any of that, then say no. I would never want to make you nervous or scared. But if you’re okay with it, and I mean really okay with what I am, what I become, and that I’m willing to stick beside you no matter how it ends, then say yes”

“You really did find her, son.”

“Someone to love me for me, and not for what they wanted me to turn into for their benefit.”

“I could die happy now because I would have this to fill me when everything else in my life had the possibility of wilting away.”

The Seelie and UnSeelie court or wicked! They are viscous, sexy, crazy, and I freaking loved every word of this book!
Kay is a girl who has accepted she's sick, she has accepted that she won't be able to do many of things other girls her age do. Then something crazy happens she sees a monster in the woods and is saved by the cutest guy.
Ryan is prince to the Seelie court and when he sees Kay he knows there is something more to her. BOY IS THERE SOMETHING MORE. Kay isn't who she thinks she is or even what she thinks she is. If u love the Seelie and UnSeelie type books then this is the book for you!

I was given this book in exchange for an honest review

FIVE FAE FAIRIES


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The Burning Star Star Series Book 1 edition by Jessie Lane Melissa LeoPahl Paranormal Romance eBooks Reviews

Well thought out characters and story keep you hooked from the first. Can't wait for the next one to see what happens next. Great read, couldn't put it down till I finished it.
This was intriguing. The world she created was fantastic and the characters were majestic. I enjoy learning their world and can't wait to dive into the second one.
This book keeps you guessing. It is one book you have to pay attention to are you will get lost in it. The story line is great and all the characters are fantastic. I can't wait to read book 2 .
OK, so where do I begin… Let’s start with the timeline… I started this book at 1145pm on Saturday night. (I know what you are thinking… Ms. Popular, well what can I say Books before Bros.) I finished this book at 2 pm Sunday afternoon. So subtract the 5(ish) hours of sleep and that just goes to show you how amazing this story is. The writing was amazing with the perfect mix of romance, action and suspense. The story jumps from perspective to perspective giving the reader a well rounded view of the story. Each character is expertly developed with their own idiosyncrasies that just add to the fun of the story. There are twists and turns you don’t expect and romances you can’t help but cheer on.

The author does an amazing job creating a traditional Fae environment filled with mythical creatures and some new ones too. Not only are the main characters lovable but Jessie does an impeccable job of making you absolutely despise the villains (yea, thats right. plural). I cannot wait until I finish book 2 in the Star Series The Frozen Star releasing May 29, 2014.
Every time a chapter came to an end and I though I could take a break, I was sucked back in because every chapter brought on something new. I felt if I stopped reading I was going to miss something.
2 huge pluses...you can't help but love a book whose main character is a ginger, automatically means feisty, which means my kind of book. You also can't hate a book that has a female character whose weapon of choice is a whip.
My rating is actually 2.5- rounding up to 3 here.

Things I liked The COVER is AMAZING!! LOVE It!

The story was interesting. I liked that the main character was not perfect, that she was diagnosed with cancer. This is something I haven't seen in a YA paranormal novel before!

The characters were well developed, for the most part, and I felt like I cared for them.

And I was very caught up in the story, very much wanting to know how it would go. It was a unique plot, and I felt like this book had SOO much potential to be amazing! When I read the summary, I was like- I MUST get this book. So, maybe my expectations were too high.

Everything else
The dialogue in the book was immature. In every single sentence the character would say the name of the person they were speaking to! Every single sentence!!!

Examples
"Rather simple, Nick. Do you know what a charm is?"
"Yes, Ryan I do."
"Good, Nick..."
OR
"Stop it Ryan."
"Stop what Kay?"

There are SOO many instances! Like when you speak in a normal conversation, how many times do you say the other person's name?? Not in every single sentence! It was very annoying.

Everyone seemed much younger than they were, though everyone was either 17 or 19, they acted talked like 13 year olds. There is a scene were Nick and Ryan first meet and they are bickering like children. It was annoying to say the least.

The author changes POV often in this book, and normally Im ok with it, I do it in my own writing, but it just felt off. There was no warning and she switched to several POVs, not just two or three.

I did skim over several paragraphs in the first half of the book because it was just so slow and the dialogue was annoying. But the second half was much better!

Also, there were several grammatical errors. When I bought this book, I thought it was published, but it was very obviously self-published. Now I am ALL FOR self-publishing, but you have to present your book properly. I mean, she could have just let ONE other person read it and they could have spotted these errors easy enough.

Overall, it wasn't terrible, but could have been SO much better. There was a cliffhanger, but Im not even interested in reading any books that follow.

Review by Mrs Jones at theresamjones.blogspot.com
Favorite Lines "The way the wolf looked at me, I felt like it saw right through me to my soul. I never knew an animal could see someone so thoroughly the way this one seemed to see me. My hands trembled at some emotion I couldn’t name. It wasn’t fear; it was more like an overwhelming sense of knowing and intimacy.”

“You’ve finally shown up after I’ve been waiting years just to meet you. I don’t know how this will end, but what I do know is that I’m not ready to say goodbye. I’ve seen you fragile and I’ve seen you strong. Part of me just wants to continue to see the rest of it. If you’re uncomfortable with any of that, then say no. I would never want to make you nervous or scared. But if you’re okay with it, and I mean really okay with what I am, what I become, and that I’m willing to stick beside you no matter how it ends, then say yes”

“You really did find her, son.”

“Someone to love me for me, and not for what they wanted me to turn into for their benefit.”

“I could die happy now because I would have this to fill me when everything else in my life had the possibility of wilting away.”

The Seelie and UnSeelie court or wicked! They are viscous, sexy, crazy, and I freaking loved every word of this book!
Kay is a girl who has accepted she's sick, she has accepted that she won't be able to do many of things other girls her age do. Then something crazy happens she sees a monster in the woods and is saved by the cutest guy.
Ryan is prince to the Seelie court and when he sees Kay he knows there is something more to her. BOY IS THERE SOMETHING MORE. Kay isn't who she thinks she is or even what she thinks she is. If u love the Seelie and UnSeelie type books then this is the book for you!

I was given this book in exchange for an honest review

FIVE FAE FAIRIES